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Ik moet voor Engels een korte tekst schrijven en die telt noch al zwaar mee.
Ik heb namelijk dyslexie dus kan iemand mij wat tips geven of willen helpen met het tekstje vertalen.

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What do you know about Shakespeare?
What inspired him?
Why is he still famous?
Why was he famous?

Shakespeare is the writer of Romeo and Juliet. He has added a lot of new words for the English language. He lives in between 1550 and 1620. He write his play in a lot of genres, for example history or comic.
His inspiration is diverted from other plays or stories. Shakespeare makes it look like he made the play or story by himself, but he didn’t.
In his stories he used new words, which we still use right now.  Like the word downstairs and upstairs.
He was famous, because this plays and stories were good and The Royal Family loved play and stories at that moment.
Shakespeare is still famous, because he let see in his story that times can change ,but people don’t chance in time.   

Alvast bedankt

Pieter
Sep 20, 2015 geplaatst in Engels door pieter1998

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wat suggesties voor je tekst Pieter, zonder al té veel in te grijpen:

Shakespeare is the writer of Romeo and Juliet and many other still famous plays: The Merchant of Venice, King Lear, Macbeth,Julius Ceasar, The Tempest a.m.o., also he was an appreciated poet. He has added a lot of new words to the English language. He lived  between 1564 and 1616. He writes his plays in a lot of genres, for example historial or comedy.
Many times his inspiration is diverted from other plays or stories. For example the Romeo and Juliet was originally an old Mesopotamian tale.
In his stories he used new words, which we still use today, like for example the words downstairs and upstairs. Also in other languages like "anderhalve man en een paardenkop" in Dutch, as well as "halve zool = half a soul".
He was popular, because his plays and stories were good (outstanding) and the Royal Family as well as the common people loved plays and stories at that time; proof of the popularity of the theatre in those days:a special theatre for his plays was build in London, the Globe.
Shakespeare is still famous, because he shows in his stories that conditions can change during  time, but people don’t chance in time.

succes !
Sep 20, 2015 beantwoord door yancito
Sep 20, 2015 gewijzigd door yancito
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